What, there's still no feedback on this story? I can't believe it!
Sara, as usual, you managed to capture the interplay between Jay and Clark perfectly. Especially the nabbing about the towel had me in stitches.
I also found it really interesting that Lois gets to see Clark not only in a towel, but also without his glasses - and probably with wet, slicked-back hair... Can't wait to see her reaction to Superman's debut.
What I find particularly fascinating is that Jay seems to be a little bit less of a moral person. Not that he is a bad person, but he seems rather fond of snooping where he isn't supposed to. Like a certain reporter we know.
Great story so far!
