Whew. Just read the whole story in a single swoop. (Work? What do you mean, I have to work? You mean I can't just sit at my desk all day?) There've been stories of Superman and alternate universes without a superman before, but this is the first where I've seen him put into our world, with our issues and problems and disasters. It really makes an impression. I kept wondering the whole time if he was going to stay in "our" world and help fix our issues, or go back to his own to prevent them there.
I really loved how you fit everything into this story, and made it almost real. And I love the ending scene.
I just wonder what happened with the older Lois and Clark?