NO NO NO NO NO!!!! It can't be over!!! It can't....
I loved this story Shayne. If it doesn't get a Kerth nod... I will be extremely disappointed.
I do wish there had been more warp up though.. it felt like we just grazed the surface of emotions with Lois and Clark coming home. But maybe I'm just being greedy.
I did like the clever add-in of HG Wells, and although I could be picky about some of the facts in there.. this is your story... ad I'll nod and go 'ah huh'.. good stuff.
"He's my best friend, best of all best friends Do you have a best friend too It tickles in my tummy He's so Yummy Yummy Hey you should get a best friend too" - Toy Box