Originally posted by TOC:
In your new vignette, Clark has apparently been married to Lois for three years and never told her that he is Superman!
After reading your comments on the story I went back and reread it. I was very confused by story but I see what you mean. When He
whispered..."I'm Superman
at the end makes sense now.
But now it seems to me that the author wants us to see that Lois already knows
He waited... but the question never came.
She didn't ask.
...and she didn't ask where he'd been. Didn't question his sudden appearance.
