The longer post was definitely worth the wait. This was a great part. I have been waiting to see how the revelation would be handled. You wrote it nicely and in a very realistic manner. Lois' reactions and emotions run the gamut and are very much in her character that has been developed in the course of this story.
I can't wait to see what they will say to each other when they see each other at work.
Keep the parts of this great story coming,
Em
"But my experience is that as soon as people are old enough to know better, they don't know anything at all."
-Oscar Wilde, "Lady Windermere's Fan"
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