I was smiling by the end of this one. It is so different than the stuff I've been reading lately. I didn't find it choppy. For me, it hit Lois and Clark right on. The banter was classic and well done. I love where you brought it.
I'm going to read it again. 10/10. I wish I could stay with them. I like the road they are on.

I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.