Elisabeth: ;-) I am glad you noticed. She calls herself "Lane" when she knows what she is going to do next and she is extremely confident in her actions ie: when she is about to go in to Mad Dog mode. She calls herself Lois when it's private or introspective or when berating herself. She does the same to others as well - she calls Clark when she feels she can be close and familiar with him, if she feels threatened or needs to distance herself, she calls him Kent.

I think it was one of those subtle things I picked up from the show - something that Clark picked up on as well that let him know when to back off and when to push a little bit further.

Glad you like it. I was worried about her thoughts and the time between the banter. Maybe that's why it takes less than five minutes to read it - the language flows fast so that you get the impression that her brain functions at several miles per minute.

The Little Tornado.


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