Chris,
My favorite parts have already been quoted so I just wanted to mention that I agree with everyone about everything. (Well, except Tank's comments - I can live just fine without a wham. wink )
Great A-plot development and the B-plot was fun to read.
One nit-pick:
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"Can you made a note of any other meetings between Benton and Carnes? Then I'll check them against the court diary when we get back to the Planet."
I think that should be "make".

Keep writing! thumbsup

Avia

"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"

Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05