Ooh, another good installment, Chris! smile The investigation is progressing nicely, and I loved the idea of a make-out session in the hall! goofy Definitely a good way to spend some time...

I'm with Hazel on the B-plot question, btw smile I enjoy a good spot of angst, but sometimes I really prefer the stories where the main conflict comes from something *other* than mutual lunkheadedness wink

Anyway, this is great! Write more! smile

PJ

"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K