Too much to quote, but I found her memories of his voice urging her to breath to be very moving.
Also, I loved the list, especially...
3. You cut your hair, don’t freak out
not sure how much to trust Star? She obviously doesn’t know you that well if she gave you a plant.
6. Call the drycleaners, your light blue suit is missing and you probably dropped it off there before this all started.
7. Check the expiration date on your milk. I meant to do this last night but I was too tired to get out of bed.
Mortified at himself, he shook his head. His mother would probably threaten to beat him if she knew he was thinking about intentionally spying on Lois... Not that he hadn’t done it before.
That had been different, though. They hadn’t been a couple before.
But they weren’t a couple now, he reminded himself.
He tore his eyes away from the building and looked down at the radio
I love this. Shame on you, Clark! Oh, wait; that's right, he didn't do it.
“Six it is. See you soon. Oh, and don’t expect me to bring flowers.” He chuckled lightly and hung up.
He may be smarmy, but he is funny every once in awhile.
I couldn't have said that one better myself.
Then, too, there was her dinner with Dan tomorrow. It really bothered Clark, more than he cared to admit. And part of his irrational brain said if she was going to have dinner with Dan that he wanted to have dinner with her, too.
I love how you write him to be a jealous little boy.
Nice segment.
Elisabeth
