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I had proof."

"Proof?" Clark prompted, raising his eyebrows.

She nodded. "My parents. They supposedly loved each other but they ended up miserable
I like how you phrased this. It's a good representation of S1 Lois's feelings about the whole concept of love.

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"You really do know me,"
This part got me. Once again, the little things are the most telling in your story--and I admire that smile

Yet another great story--I guess Christmas really inspires people!


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