I had proof."
"Proof?" Clark prompted, raising his eyebrows.
She nodded. "My parents. They supposedly loved each other but they ended up miserable
I like how you phrased this. It's a good representation of S1 Lois's feelings about the whole concept of love.
This part got me. Once again, the little things are the most telling in your story--and I admire that
Yet another great story--I guess Christmas really inspires people!