Jessi this was totally adorable. I loved every line. A wonderful explanation/idea for the picture of Clark with the Superman logo tattoo'd on his arm.

I loved the thought of Clark not being able to hold his liquor because of exposure to Kryptonite. And then thinking he was man enough to take it, even if he wasn't Superman? Hah! That was priceless.

You write the characters so well - I could totally see them at the bar and the tattoo parlor and when he came stumbling out of the bank.

I say we need a sequel. We need to see what Lois thinks/does when she puts 2 and 2 together. Oh, and maybe she'll get a tattoo too at some point, to match his - then we'll have a complete "photo".

But wonderful job! Thanks for sharing -- and I hope you are off in fantasy land right now, dreaming up another story as good as this one.

-- MR angel-devil


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