Ooo, yay! Another part!

Sorry to hear we'll have a wait for the next one, though.

Good job with Clark's introspection at the beginning of this one. His thoughts on her reaction to the globe. I love the realization that he was after an ideal of Lois, just as she was after Superman. Very nice.

The whole baby pictures scene was just really fun.

Too bad he didn't tell Lois about the Kryptonite, but that's Clark for you.

Oh, the grasshopper! laugh I love that!

I see the A-plot is coming along nicely, too.

Really looking forward to seeing more of this, when it's ready. smile

Paul

When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.