Originally Posted by Toomi8
So 110 ficlets? You'll be able to carry on ficlet Friday for two whole years!!!! laugh

Adorable fic! Excited to read allllll the other fics...

Right, Toomi?? If only I could manage to keep up that pace! LOL!


Originally Posted by JadedEvie
I just loved this one! The angst was PALPABLE.

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My breath catches as I realize this moment has already happened today and it’s not deja vu.
This whole section - it's such a great place to use this particular trope of the hand on the cheek reveal - it really marries the way Lois canonically realized it and how she's learning it here, and there's something nicely poetic about it.

Ahhh, JadedEvie! You're spoiling me with the amazing feedback!! I wish I could sit and respond to each one because I love that you pulled out certain lines and said such amazing things about them!! But I lack the time right now! frown

But I did want to mention this one because it wasn't until I rewatched this that I noticed he ACTUALLY does this in the show as Superman and as Clark in the SAME DAY. GAHH! So how could I not use that? Right?

Thank you and Toomi both!!

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