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The sky cracked. For a split second, she could clearly see everything: the seemingly endless ocean all around her and the swirling, grey vortex of clouds overhead looked other-dimensional. By the time she registered the massive tree floating right into her path, she was plunged into darkness again.

The storm's intensity was really powerfully described. I am glad he was able to save Kim's little boy, but it also made him think about his own son. Poor Clark! No doubt he wishes he could be in two places at once.

The last lines were precious and touching.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.