Beautifully written, as always. I also applaud that Lois's reaction to Clark's secret was mature, and she was able to work through her anger without causing others unnecessary pain. Something I always felt was often missing in the show, when they tended to show her having a temper tantrum. Lois is a professional, and while she had her "Mad Dog" moments, in order to make it to the top of her male-dominated profession, she would have to have been able to be the consummate professional under stress, which the episodes showed too rarely. Additionally, as the older sister in a dysfunctional family, she grew up faster than someone in a healthier family.

Glad to see a hint of James in Jimmy, although I'm glad he wasn't necessary in this fic. Looking forward to the next part. clap

Last edited by cuidadora; 11/19/18 01:22 PM.

Cuidadora

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