I really enjoyed the story. I don't think I've ever read one where Wonder Woman is openly hostile and suspicious of Clark. It's a new and refreshing angle, true to her rather secluded and sheltered upbringing on an island full of women who do not trust men in any way, shape, or form.

I love how Wonder Woman's hostility toward Clark facilitates a closer bonding between Lois and Clark, even if Lois hasn't yet figured out that Superman is Clark. It's nicely done, particularly with how vulnerable Clark is in the story - both emotionally and physically wounded.

Well done!


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon