Yay for feedback
Folc- thanks
I finally managed to write it so Clark didn't sound like a petulant child!
RJS- not sure where you're getting this whole 'no negative feedback' thing from. You want to leave CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, go right ahead, I'm a big girl. I'm not quite sure how staying to work on their relationship equates to stalking, however. As Lynn said down the page, hovering outside her window in the pilot is much creepier.
Carrie- thank you!
Lynn- yeah I tried to flesh it out but that completely ruined the flow. I think this is the shortest story I've ever written LOL. Definitely agree with the lurking outside her window thing- THAT was stalkerish.
