I really like how you've started this. I remember when this challenge was originally posted and I loved the idea. Lois finding out about the 'Guy Rules' by overhearing the conversation at the copier was a clever way of introducing the concept to her.

I kept thinking that Clark was going to catch on to her line of thinking, but then I remembered that 'Lois' isn't one of Clark's fluent languages. Can't wait to read more.