Ohh! Poor little Lois, not understanding. mecry Even her father thinks she's a freak, that's awful. Super glad for how you've painted Ellen Lane here, though. She's such a good mother sloppy my hero.

Ooh, and Lois is back now but no Clark? Very intriguing. I like the uses of time jumps here a lot, keeps us on our toes. hyper

Can't wait to see where this goes!

(Also I was getting worried where the comments thread was, thinking maybe there was a different format you were using? So glad I double checked and came back for this wink )


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain