Gosh...things are going downhill quickly, and Lois hasn't dealt her finally blow yet. I really don't know what she's doing, or why she's trusting her source - there has to be a solid reason for why she's going through with what seems to be an awfully cruel plan. Poor Clark - you can't help but feel for him for being blindsided by Lois' casual treatment. I'm hooked on the story, waiting for your vision to play itself out.


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink