Originally Posted by groobie
Loved it...great tension between Lois and Clark when they met. You did a good job capturing their feelings towards their places in life - the sense of inevitability they both feel as a consequence of their stations. Looking forward to more...and happy to see there will be so much more of it! clap

Thanks! Glad you like it! I'm glad you liked how Lois and Clark both feel trapped by their circumstances. But both are very determined young people willing to do what they must to protect the people they love. Even at the expense of their own happiness.

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