Nobody tortures Lois and Clark more than AntiKrytponite! Correction: nobody tortures Lois who then tortures Clark better!
I don't know how you did it, but you actually have me feeling bad for Lois. I can tell that she's starting to really care for Clark, as more than a friend, but somehow she believes that hurting him would be good for Superman (and/or thereby the world). I can't see how that would be, could ever be true. She's certainly being manipulated by someone. Although, I have no firm idea of who. I don't want Lois to hurt Clark; I want Clark and Lois to figure out together how they can save the future without breaking Clark's heart (and Lois's in turn).
I'm glad Lois now sees Luthor for who he really is.
As for typos, I didn't see any. Perhaps those 5 rewrites did the trick on catching all of them.
