This story deserves a little more of a comment from me than a single line.

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“Anyway, it doesn’t matter,” she says quickly, the words coming so fast they fall to lay in her wake only to be trampled underfoot when she turns to pace back the way she came. “I told Lex I couldn’t marry him.”

Those few lines are the opening salvo to a battle. One that has three sides: Lois, Clark and Lex. She does not wear her heart on her sleeve for just anyone so I have to suspect that Lex is putting Ms. Lane up to some diabolical. My only hope is that Clark and company figure it out before its too late.

Somebody call Inspector Henderson! Clark is going to need all the assistance he can get. Date indeed!

Great to see you back on the boards. Please send another part soon!

Last edited by Morgana; 03/27/16 08:53 PM. Reason: Additional comments
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.