I love this beginning to this story. Everything is so in character and well written. I couldn't stop my grin at *Hugh Cain* and Terisa Hatcher* Now that would be a movie worth seeing!
Meh, Lana doesn't hold a candle to Lois but at least she is the stepping stone for Lois to realize how deep her feelings are for Clark that are not strictly friendly.
Oh, the dance scene at the end!!! I thoroughly enjoyed that so much as you wrote it superbly that it felt like you were there watching them.
With your attention to detail it draws you into the story rather than just reading it. Truly you are a wonderful writer, thank you for sharing your talent!
