Great beginning. The names of the actors in the movie made me chuckle, and the fact that Lois is wondering how Superman knew about the movie ... Clark needs to be careful.
Yes. Clark does need to be careful.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
