That was a very realistic ending. A very thoughtful conversation, made possible by the fact that Lois had had time after reading the novel to process the information and reflect on what had happened between them with that new insight into his perspective. Congrats on your first story. I hope we see more of you in this fandom.


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink