Lara Jorelle Kent

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Well, DarthMike has already mentioned most points I wanted to, so there's little left to say but that I enjoyed this. I'm generally not a fan of extensive dream sequences, but this one was done quite nicely.


Yeah, Darth did take a lot of the good stuff and mentioned it didn't he? So glad you liked Part 2! smile1 The dream sequence was long, but it did bring home to Lois how bleak her life would be without Clark in it. Loysa and Kaldar were stuck in a time and place were their marriage would have signaled a war. Both of them loved their country far to much for that.

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“Clark Jerome Kent, open this door right now!”
Hello to you too, Lois! Nice to see you. laugh
Glad to see Mad Dog back.

Yeah and when opening the door, but certain to duck! LOL!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.