The second chapter!!

One thing a Morgana story will bring is copious amounts of detail. It brings you deep into the story, much like you a living it rather than merely observing it. Enriching it if you will. It is obvious that she does so much research into all aspects of the story and it shows in the final product. This story is no different.

While the dream dance sequence is really not my cup of tea, the wrap up was outstanding. Clark had better get ready to duck!

Superb work!

Mike

Last edited by Mike M; 12/29/15 06:58 PM.

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Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

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