I thought this part of the story was very well done. You've given us a serious and thoughtful reflection on how both characters could have realistically been thinking through the fallout from the BatP/HoL events. Hopefully as the story progresses, they'll be able to work through the pain they've both caused and come through the other side together.


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink