Hi Mike, thank you for posting a new part Oops ...for creating the FDK post and for letting me know about my error.
Thank you nivafrer for the story! Sorry for the confusion of name, in my defense, I'd just finished the story that I wanted to say how great it was, my eyes already closing because it was quite late and so I just looked at the name on the fdk post!
In three parts, you developed this interesting storyline shedding new light on a well-known story. That was one hell of a great chapter.
You did a thorough analysis of Lois, and especially Clark's feeling and thoughts regarding the present situation.
I particularly like that you made Clark thought about it from Lois' perspective (her fear of love, her trust in Superman, or the fact that she's doubting Clark partly because he is always running away).
I am really looking forward to the next parts.
Last edited by Annalina19; 11/02/15 05:25 PM.
