Great and exciting chapter, Feli
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I agree--being your first longer story, I'm really impressed with the storyline...the pace, the overall feel. You have me waiting each week for another post
. Just simply can't get enough of this story!
I had never read anything about using lead foil to cover Kryptonite--what a really great idea! And the fact that Lois can keep a piece of it tucked into her shoe? Love that
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The race to see who can get there first. Who will win? Can Clark protect/save Lois? So excited to read more
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Great job!
Laura
