(Using his best Darth Michael voice): I for one am still waiting on Lois to explain the Trival Pursuit night to Cindy!!
I have to agree with Virginia though, for the archive you probably should put some sort of a bridge in the epilogue: "18 months later..." or something like that to tie to back to wedding and new pact or maybe add a new pact about parenthood. Some sort of bridge.
Loved the entire story, particularly the messed up dating attempts. It is my type of story so of course I would love it
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Mike
