This was a great first effort smile I loved the ending with Clark alone in the chair looking at Lois especially smile And Enya, of course, is a lovely choice of music. As for advice, I pretty much agree with what has already been given.

Thanks for sharing with us smile I can't wait to see what the future brings from you clap

Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
The courage to change the things I can,
And the wisdom to know the difference.