Hey David
So threats of me convinced you to post, huh?
Excellent work, Sara, Jenni and Kae!
Keep it up!
Ditto Chris absolutely, David. Very nicely done indeed - short, but packed full of emotion, meaning and anguish. You do a terrific job of showing just enough and leaving the reader to piece together the rest. A heartbreaking choice for Superman, of course; and, of course, the father's first thought is for his kids, even in the midst of his own pain and fear.
Well, this better be the first of many, you hear??
Wendy
