Oh, David, you didn't
really think you'd get away with posting a story like this on the boards and swearing you're not a writer, did you?
I really loved this
Such an original take, and as TJ has said, it really made you see things from the guy's perspective. And, of course, an unHEA ending to round it all off
Soooo... I'm ready for story #2... any day now... you could even post it in time for my birthday...
Sorcha