I know my error prompted this post, so my apologies! Seriously, if you're going to write a fic, get the names straight. No excuse for that, none. I just wish I'd seen the link to the scripts before I made an even worse error in the second chapter. I should probably not even attempt to write another fic, I'm sure I'll just screw things up even more. confused


LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better