The tap dance they're doing around one another leaves me so wistful. Or maybe it's Clark who's so wistful. Either way. At least they're close.
As feedback, I can't really tell what Lois is thinking. Her feelings are a blank slate to me except for her enjoyment of the kiss. She acknowledges her concern for Clark as he goes out the door but anything more is still obscured. Is that where you intend for us to be or are we supposed to feel an inkling? With one part to go, it'll take quite a revelation to move her from friend to lover....but then, again, this is you writing. It'll be an epic in a teapot. (Or something like that).
Marvelous--and....More!
Sherry
