Chris,
You've soooooo got me hooked on this story!! Another great part!! thumbsup

I loved the inner struggle with CJ -- both the shades of grey dilemma, and the "Lois" struggle (the same but not the same, the familiar to him but not to her, controlling his "feelings" and thoughts) It's great!! I really like this Lois, edgy, insightful, but more trusting laugh

Keep the new stuff coming!!

S (the impatient one who's up way past her bedtime because she just found the new part!! dizzy )


"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'