I didn't find anything flat about this particular segment, Chris, I was absorbed and enthralled throughout, as usual. I adore the wealth of detail you include in each scene, which makes it so atmospheric.

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CJ nodded and swung the briefcase effortlessly onto his thighs. Then he undid the combination lock and popped its catches open. Lois shifted along the love seat so that she could peek inside as soon as he lifted the lid.
I loved this. That Lane curiosity never fails. And C J's reaction was just adorable.

Wonderful to see them working as a team and the argument about the legalities of Lois's information gathering methods was given a fresher emphasis with CJ being a lawyer. I enjoyed Lois's introspection and Clark's rescue.

I see that you've already got another part posted, so I'll head along there. jump

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers