Excuse me one moment while I defrost my eyelashes... (and no, I'm not kidding. I just removed an actual chunk of ice from my lashes)
Okay, ready to reply to feedback!
It's always so nice to see such positive reviews! They make me feel all nice and warm and I almost forget the minus forty weather outside. (well, almost)
gr8shades, I do consider myself privileged to get feedback from you! Who else would tell me when I made a stupid choice for a character name?
But seriously, I just like knowing that people are reading and enjoying the story, and that's usefull enough.
Love that Clark helped Kaylie with her powers - he's got more experience than anyone!
So true, Carol! He's the most experienced teacher out there when it comes to superpowers.
PJ, although I don't have a cold, I sympathize with you about the lack of sleep thing. No sleep last night makes for a very loopy Beth. Wheee indeed.
JD, poor Jon is slowly mutilating himself due to his lack of caution and all you can do is laugh at him? Tsk tsk.
The poor guy has had a very bad day, and it's about to get even more interesting.
Lara and Michael, thanks of commenting too!
Michael, I consider Kaylie's throwaway comment a sign of just how far her and Jon have come since the beginning. Do you remember when she first told him she didn't like heights? She hated having to share that fear with him, but she can just toss it over her shoulder as she continues to boss him around.
In case anyone was wondering, I also love getting criticism on the stuff I post here. I love all the positive reviews, but if there's anything that's not working for you guys, please tell me that too!