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FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) #296235 05/22/23 10:05 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 884 Likes: 21	Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) Let me know what you think! -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) SuperBek #296240 05/22/23 11:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 22 New Jersey, USA A Ailujecarg Blogger
Ailujecarg Blogger A Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 22 New Jersey, USA	Wow, I'm not normally one for fics that lengthen Clark's time dealing with New Krypton, but I really, really like this premise! Interesting how Jon was never told. How did they manage to keep that a secret all that time?! Looking forward to part 2! (And then part 3, and 4, and 5...)

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) SuperBek #296245 05/23/23 07:17 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,521 Likes: 30 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,521 Likes: 30 Germany	I'm curious where you will be taking this. Can't wait for part 2 It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) SuperBek #296247 05/23/23 08:48 AM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 999 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Features Writer
Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 999 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Looking forward to more, though I wonder why they felt they had to keep that bit a secret. They already told him his dad was away. Glad he can feel how much his mom loves him! I bet that will be a huge help.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) Blueowl #296251 05/23/23 02:22 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 884 Likes: 21	Originally Posted by Ailujecarg Wow, I'm not normally one for fics that lengthen Clark's time dealing with New Krypton, but I really, really like this premise! Interesting how Jon was never told. How did they manage to keep that a secret all that time?! Looking forward to part 2! (And then part 3, and 4, and 5...) Yeah, I don't like Clark to be gone for so long either But I hope you like where this story goes!! We'll get a little bit of insight into how they kept it a secret in a later chapter! Originally Posted by bakasi I'm curious where you will be taking this. Can't wait for part 2 Thanks for reading! It's weird to me with these short little chapters (after the monster chapters I've written for Destined!)... But I'll try to just post one per day Originally Posted by Blueowl Looking forward to more, though I wonder why they felt they had to keep that bit a secret. They already told him his dad was away. Glad he can feel how much his mom loves him! I bet that will be a huge help. I think it was something they didn't really think through... We'll get just a little bit more insight later (although, of course, since the story is written in Jon's perspective, we don't get ALL the info). He certainly does feel ALL THE LOVE from his mom. And more than that later too. Thanks for reading! Chapter 2 coming shortly -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) SuperBek #296277 05/24/23 03:57 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Her thoughts then did that thing that Ms. Severs’s thoughts had done, switching from clear sentences to images, feelings, and fragments. And he stumbled and fell to the ground as he felt the weight of his mother’s love hit him all at once. Love and relief. His hands and knees hit the hard packed dirt of the road, and he winced in pain. Tears welled up in his eyes, and although he tried to hold them back, the burden he’d carried with him all day suddenly became too much. He pushed himself over and up into a sitting position, buried his face in his hands, and cried. My heart goes out for that poor little boy! Imagine everyone in town knows what happened to your Dad, but you are left completely in the dark. Now these strange powers start to surface... Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) Morgana #296279 05/24/23 05:12 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 884 Likes: 21	Originally Posted by Morgana Quote Her thoughts then did that thing that Ms. Severs’s thoughts had done, switching from clear sentences to images, feelings, and fragments. And he stumbled and fell to the ground as he felt the weight of his mother’s love hit him all at once. Love and relief. His hands and knees hit the hard packed dirt of the road, and he winced in pain. Tears welled up in his eyes, and although he tried to hold them back, the burden he’d carried with him all day suddenly became too much. He pushed himself over and up into a sitting position, buried his face in his hands, and cried. My heart goes out for that poor little boy! Imagine everyone in town knows what happened to your Dad, but you are left completely in the dark. Now these strange powers start to surface... YUP. Poor Jon! He's gonna have a lot to deal with coming up. Thanks for reading! -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) SuperBek #297587 09/23/23 06:36 PM
Joined: Aug 2023 Posts: 61 Likes: 1 México CarolD Freelance Reporter
CarolD Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2023 Posts: 61 Likes: 1 México	¡¡Pobre Jon!! ¿En verdad puede leer los pensamientos? Seguiré leyendo.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (1/15) CarolD #297600 09/24/23 01:18 PM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 884 Likes: 21 SuperBek OP Features Writer
OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 884 Likes: 21	Originally Posted by CarolD ¡¡Pobre Jon!! ¿En verdad puede leer los pensamientos? Seguiré leyendo. Yes, poor kiddo!

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