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Well, things are about to get pretty intense. . . . Taken

Please let me know what you think ^_^

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My reactions in this chapter were as follows....

love Awwwww! I hope they get good news from Dr. Klein!

smile1 Yay for Jimmy!!!

How fun, a baseball game!
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shock OMG No!!!!!! thud

Great writing and storytelling and wow.... Please do post the next chapter soon though grovel

-Bek

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Pulitzer
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Holy cow, the action outta picking up considerably. Great writing, but also, you can't leave us here. Get back like right now. Can't wait for the next chapter.


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Hack from Nowheresville
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Oh my, more!!! Please!Fast!Danger of medical emergency.

That one was a rollercoaster!


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SuperBek -- Thanks for outlining your emotions smile1 Sorry for knocking you out. I would say you'll be revived by the coming part, but I shouldn't make any promises.

bakasi -- ^_^ Next part will be up soon.

sunshine6812 -- Thanks. Probably should hold on to something.

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Pulitzer
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The conversation between Superman and Dr. Klein is brilliant and funny!

What a terrible thing has happened to Superman and poor Lois had to watch the whole ordeal of seeing her husband suffer at the hands of an intergalactic assassin.

Interesting that Lois wished she had more friends.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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