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Posted By: Blueowl FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 01/13/23 11:26 PM
Well, things are about to get pretty intense. . . . Taken

Please let me know what you think ^_^
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 01/14/23 01:52 AM
My reactions in this chapter were as follows....

love Awwwww! I hope they get good news from Dr. Klein!

smile1 Yay for Jimmy!!!

How fun, a baseball game!
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shock OMG No!!!!!! thud

Great writing and storytelling and wow.... Please do post the next chapter soon though grovel

-Bek

hyper
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 01/14/23 08:39 AM
Holy cow, the action outta picking up considerably. Great writing, but also, you can't leave us here. Get back like right now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Posted By: sunshine6812 Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 01/14/23 11:44 AM
Oh my, more!!! Please!Fast!Danger of medical emergency.

That one was a rollercoaster!
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 01/14/23 09:35 PM
SuperBek -- Thanks for outlining your emotions smile1 Sorry for knocking you out. I would say you'll be revived by the coming part, but I shouldn't make any promises.

bakasi -- ^_^ Next part will be up soon.

sunshine6812 -- Thanks. Probably should hold on to something.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (5/13) - 05/06/23 02:00 AM
The conversation between Superman and Dr. Klein is brilliant and funny!

What a terrible thing has happened to Superman and poor Lois had to watch the whole ordeal of seeing her husband suffer at the hands of an intergalactic assassin.

Interesting that Lois wished she had more friends.
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