No kidding, this is intense. I kept thinking that Mark was the bad guy...I just have bad vibes with that joker.
Please post the next part soon! This is really good. I, like others have a hard time thinking that Jimmy is a nasty...even in an AU piece. Something tells me that Jimmy may have gotten 'into' this 'situation' without being aware of of his involvement.
I do like Clark's blabbering slippages, they are so cute, and eventually Lois will put two and two together and realize that he's in love with her. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure that one out.
Paris for dinner...Oooh, la la!!!