Sorry I didn't meet my Tuesday or Wednesday deadline!! Getting closer to finding out who the bad guy(s) is/are!

Hi,

Great part.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

No kidding, this is intense. I kept thinking that Mark was the bad guy...I just have bad vibes with that joker.

Please post the next part soon! This is really good. I, like others have a hard time thinking that Jimmy is a nasty...even in an AU piece. Something tells me that Jimmy may have gotten 'into' this 'situation' without being aware of of his involvement.

I do like Clark's blabbering slippages, they are so cute, and eventually Lois will put two and two together and realize that he's in love with her. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure that one out.

Paris for dinner...Oooh, la la!!!

A strange package coming into the airport for Boyle marked confindential. Hmmmmm, I wonder what that could be?

Lois must really be happy to see and talk to another person 'from home' because she seems quite animated and 'playful' with Clark.

I've finished this part so you can post the next one now.

Tank (who, if it were up to him, would just fly Lois out of there under the cover of darkness and the heck with any political or bureaucractic whining)

Well done Lois!!! You didn't go to dinner with him

Chris

A great part!

This is very intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Tricia

I think if I were a lady watching this in a movie theater I'd be standing up waving my fist at the screen yelling, "Damn Clark, fly her outta there like now!!!"

Unfortunately, I don't have that kind of medium to express myself and of course that would ruin the whole aspect of the story. Okay so I'll chain myself to my mental chair and wait it out, but the "package" of course has me worried.

KEEP Going!!!

TEEEJ