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Okay, this is the real version. All comments, praises, and constructive criticism are welcome.
Bethy
I don't suffer from insanity...I enjoy every minute of it.
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Oh, wow. Just . . . wow!
That was GREAT!
Is it time for part 2 yet?
Now?
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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Wow a revelation. I just love those. More soon! laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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"Lois, I'm Superman"!
Yes it's coming next...I feel it!
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A revelation? Hmmmm... yah think?
Actually it would be funny if Clark began to back track and hem and haw, deciding that he can't really come clean with Lois just yet. Not while he's still hurting and unsure of her true feelings.
Of course, that would really make a dandy mess of things wouldn't it?
Tank (who thinks it would be all right to post the rest tomorrow)
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Ooooooooooo, can't wait for the rest! Great sequel so far.  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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oooo... nice, bethy! great start.  lois realizes she should trust clark! go lois! clark, the woman was proposed to. it's not her fault, you dork. :p good work with the argument. darn stupid "shoot your mouth off because you're hurting" reflex...  Paul
When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
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Bethy WOW! A wonderful start! Please post it soon. Tricia 
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Wow! Nice sequel!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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WEDNESDAY!!!!! I gotta wait til tomorrow for this to continue, hmmm, nope sorry can't wait here is my direct email address, send it to me in the next,...say,...hour and I promise not to hound you. BARK!
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Bethy, Excellent! Very nice. I loved this. Ditto to what everyone else up above has already said. And the best part is, I just read this today, and it is already WEDNESDAY!!!! So, bring on Part 2!  - Vicki
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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Ehem! As has been pointed out ... It's Wednesday.
Nan
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that was great Bethy
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Thank you for all your comments! Yes, I realize it's Wednesday...I even realize it's almost past Wednesday. Had a busy day with literally no time for the computer. Aren't you glad that I'm willing to postpone bedtime to post, though? Seriously, I'm glad you all liked it so much. I had a lot of fun writing this and hope the second part lives up to expectations. Though Tank will probably be disappointed. <g> Bethy
I don't suffer from insanity...I enjoy every minute of it.
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