Okay, this is the real version. All comments, praises, and constructive criticism are welcome.

Bethy

Oh, wow. Just . . . wow!

That was GREAT!





Is it time for part 2 yet?





Now?

Wow a revelation. I just love those. More soon! laura

"Lois, I'm Superman"!

Yes it's coming next...I feel it!

A revelation? Hmmmm... yah think?

Actually it would be funny if Clark began to back track and hem and haw, deciding that he can't really come clean with Lois just yet. Not while he's still hurting and unsure of her true feelings.

Of course, that would really make a dandy mess of things wouldn't it?

Tank (who thinks it would be all right to post the rest tomorrow)

Ooooooooooo, can't wait for the rest!

Great sequel so far.

~Liz

oooo... nice, bethy! great start.

lois realizes she should trust clark! go lois!

clark, the woman was proposed to. it's not her fault, you dork. :p

good work with the argument. darn stupid "shoot your mouth off because you're hurting" reflex...

Paul

Bethy

WOW! A wonderful start! Please post it soon.

Tricia

Wow! Nice sequel!!

WEDNESDAY!!!!! I gotta wait til tomorrow for this to continue, hmmm, nope sorry can't wait here is my direct email address, send it to me in the next,...say,...hour and I promise not to hound you. BARK!

TEEEEEJ
tj@fastmn.com

Hi,

Great part.

Bethy,

Excellent! Very nice. I loved this. Ditto to what everyone else up above has already said.

And the best part is, I just read this today, and it is already WEDNESDAY!!!! So, bring on Part 2!

- Vicki

Ehem! As has been pointed out ... It's Wednesday.

Nan

that was great Bethy
merry

Thank you for all your comments! Yes, I realize it's Wednesday...I even realize it's almost past Wednesday. Had a busy day with literally no time for the computer. Aren't you glad that I'm willing to postpone bedtime to post, though?

Seriously, I'm glad you all liked it so much. I had a lot of fun writing this and hope the second part lives up to expectations. Though Tank will probably be disappointed. <g>

Bethy