Excellent!

Lex at the press conference was everything you have written him to be. Intelligent, witty urbane and quite mannerly. In short, he charmed the pants off the Fourth Estate and they enjoyed every minute of it. Who else but Lex could put a positive spin on having his own personal security force?

Roberta or Bobbie was a very interesting and vital new character to this story. Ultra Woman was right...despite the 'down home' affectations she is not a woman to be trifled with. Even Lex recognized that!

'Imperial Stormtroopers'... nice. clap

Glad to know Arianna's poisoning plot was uncovered quickly. Still she might have been too clever by halves...what person - criminal or not - would ally themselves with someone like her? confused

Karen Vollmer's meeting with Ultra Woman was bone chilling to say the least. Might I add here that having Lois speak in this manner is a VERY good idea. No one would confuse her with Lois Lane.

Bring on chapter FIVE!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.