Comments here please! Any mistakes, typos, general dislikes, or complete off the wall comments will help! Thanks!

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By the way, I forgot to mention that this may not be the fluffiest of tales. It will have a little bit of WHAM to it eventually, but by far nothing as horrible as I've written before. Just kind of emotional/mental stuff. At least, I don't consider that WHAM... but I tend to take everything to an extreme that most people don't go to. evil


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain